Two versions of the same moment; the first is a Saturnica, the second is a Nonet.
Dad stands with son,
points across the river.
“See that reed near the edge? Here’s my rifle; can you hit it?”
Three shots see reed quiver,
fall, float free done.
Dad stands with son, points across the stream.
“You see that reed? Here’s my rifle;
can you hit it?” Son shoots thrice.
Reed’s nicked, falls, floats away;
hands rifle to Dad
saying “That one?”