Storm

The storm rolls
on bowling balls.

It gutters and strikes
in the alleys and lanes
through 10 frames,
pays and rumbles away.

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Note
this is intended as a parody of Carl Sandberg’s Fog, which can be found here:
http://www.bartleby.com/104/76.html

4 comments

  1. Hi Michael

    What a wonderful way to complement Sandburg’s poem with sound to companion his quieting silence. Love the analogy to bowling. It’s very apt. So Nicely done!

    Thanks,
    Wendy

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  2. Thank you Wendy. When using another poem is a takeoff point, I try to make my piece stand on its own even while suggesting the connection to the original.

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