Forgiveness

When walls

f

a

l

l

forgiveness

f~l~o~w~s.

There’s a

d

e

e

p

e

r

d~e~p~t~h
of love to know.

More smiles
extend east to west.
A face is valued at its best.
Glances take second looks.
There’s more to see–naturally.
Helping hands reach to touch.
A silent hug speaks, tells so much.

When walls

f

a

l

l

forgiveness f~l~o~w~s.

There’s a 

d

e

e

p

e

r

d~e~p~t~h

of love to know.

10 comments

    • Hey Francina,
      I’m happy the falling-down-the-page formatting catches your attention in this particular poem. I played with formats a bit this AM and thought this one would emphasize meaning best. Glad it works. I appreciate your time & comments.
      Jan

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  1. I’m glad you take the time to listen and watch the important things. Even more, I appreciate how you express your understandings. You showed me the falling wall; I saw and heard hope and love on the other side, through your poetic voice. Thank you.
    ptc

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    • Dear Ptc,
      I appreciate your time with this one. I enjoy looking, seeing, & often seeing more in a second or third glance. Poetic connections pull us there. Then we share. Have a lovely Sunday. The weather is incredible here. S’wonderful with September’s breezes.
      Jan

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    • Dear Maryse,

      Thank you for taking time here. How I love when messages overlap to strengthen our understanding. Somehow a smile quickly appears on my face & makes itself at home as I read your comments. May ‘forgiveness messages’ continue to collide.

      Take care.
      Jan

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